Venice in the Veil of Mist
Whispers of Magic in the Foggy Lagoon

The water in Venice, where rivers converge, lets one hear the history.
A lovely, delicate veil descends.
When smog covers this wet region.
Though their appearance differs greatly, the gray-clad domes and summits remain where they are.
Every gondola travels silently from coast to coast like a ghostful shadow.
The bridges leave an enigmatic path as they gently twist with ethereal ease and you could only barely see their forms.
Still there like ghosts in a fairy tale of St. Mark's and Doge's Palace.
The tight streets resembled a maze.
They write a different story in the clouds.
Every footfall has subdued, gentle muted sounds.
In this wonderful smooth night.
On the cobblestones where secrets are shared, the lamplight lends a ghostly hue.
The reflections are smooth and fuzzy, glittering like the dreams of the city are realizing.
There were just whispers, a bird far away, and the sound of waves breaking audible.
As the fog sweeps over Venice, the city lets slow, long breaths.
The hug of the lagoon, a silver mist, takes over your emotions; you cannot say no.
There is a quiet, deep charm in Venice, where the fog does visit.
The hush seemed to have halted time. a universe created long ago from which the mists have evolved.
Venice is art there in front of us in this blurry shape.
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Wonderful! Nice read
After reading your poem, I believe Venice is an excellent spot to visit.