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Venice in the Veil of Mist

Whispers of Magic in the Foggy Lagoon

By Jason “Jay” BenskinPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read

The water in Venice, where rivers converge, lets one hear the history.

A lovely, delicate veil descends.

When smog covers this wet region.

Though their appearance differs greatly, the gray-clad domes and summits remain where they are.

Every gondola travels silently from coast to coast like a ghostful shadow.

The bridges leave an enigmatic path as they gently twist with ethereal ease and you could only barely see their forms.

Still there like ghosts in a fairy tale of St. Mark's and Doge's Palace.

The tight streets resembled a maze.

They write a different story in the clouds.

Every footfall has subdued, gentle muted sounds.

In this wonderful smooth night.

On the cobblestones where secrets are shared, the lamplight lends a ghostly hue.

The reflections are smooth and fuzzy, glittering like the dreams of the city are realizing.

There were just whispers, a bird far away, and the sound of waves breaking audible.

As the fog sweeps over Venice, the city lets slow, long breaths.

The hug of the lagoon, a silver mist, takes over your emotions; you cannot say no.

There is a quiet, deep charm in Venice, where the fog does visit.

The hush seemed to have halted time. a universe created long ago from which the mists have evolved.

Venice is art there in front of us in this blurry shape.

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Jason “Jay” Benskin

Crafting authored passion in fiction, horror fiction, and poems.

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  • Amy little2 years ago

    Wonderful! Nice read

  • Gloria Penelope2 years ago

    After reading your poem, I believe Venice is an excellent spot to visit.

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