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Veins Like Rivers Flow

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By Oneg In The ArcticPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Veins Like Rivers Flow
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A tendril of rage courses through veins tainted blue blood

Thorns extend through limbs gone slack

Roots split off in every direction mindlessly seeking

Home in a house that's barely a shell

From a blazing sun glare blinding and blanching

Bones that are just brittle beams of a structure bent

(Though never broken)

As critters crisscross across a chest cavity that holds too much ache

Screams still echo in bone marrow

A brother's cry lingers as he holds blue-lip tainted brother

As brush and bramble overgrow and weeds decorate rubble that still rumbles

A mother digs until numb fingers paint dirt crimson

Every family tree has a branch burnt or still left burning

A house once a home lays crumbled

A system we pretend is bent and not broken

Continues to break backs and brittle bones as if there is still fresh air to fill in a chest cavity

Instead of white phosphorus that clings to a name that will not arise again

There is so much rage seeping into once-nourished soil

Now left as a reminder that existence is an inconvenience

A weed, a thorn, a cavity

Something needing to be plucked, clipped, shaved down until

Nothing remains

And remains lay as reminders of genocide that hasn’t been stopped

But you are not forgotten

You are not erased

One day Palestine will be free from the river to the sea

And water, not blood, will flow and fill in all crevices and cavities

Nourishing this land again

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About the Creator

Oneg In The Arctic

A queer storyteller and poet of arctic adventures, good food, identity, mental health, and more.

Co-founder of Queer Vocal Voices

Water is Life ✊

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  • Raphael Fontenelle8 months ago

    Indeed they will be.

  • The Dani Writerabout a year ago

    One day Palestine WILL be free! This has been decreed. Your poem is a fitting remembrance of the immense needless suffering endured. It must never be forgotten. Our hearts must hold them all.

  • R.C. Taylorabout a year ago

    As summer has been going, I've noticed that the call for cease fire and and end to the genocide has lessened. Thank you so much for bringing light to this issue!

  • Grz Colmabout a year ago

    A vivid picture painted - phenomenal piece Oneg! 👏😊

  • Melissa Ingoldsbyabout a year ago

    Impactful with every line like a gut punch 🤜 my dear friend this is beyond brilliant

  • kpabout a year ago

    this was incredible. so much struck me - from the mother digging to the white phosphorus clinging and the allusion to the olive trees. "From a blazing sun glare blinding and blanching" made me think of the old saying about the sun never setting on the british empire. its influence and fuckery things we still feel and work to liberate ourselves from today. yes, history repeats, but it also evolves. i think a lot about the map of us military bases around the world. imperialism fully facilitated by modernity. and by a democracy, no less! you are right. one day, palestine will be free, from the river to the sea. and on that day, we will all gain liberation, even if only to a degree.

  • Denise E Lindquistabout a year ago

    So very sad how genocide iscan happen over and over again. Thank you for sharing this. 😢😭

  • Wow. I didn’t realise what this was about until the end… it genuinely felt like you were describing my present living situation, and Sri Lanka 😳 Very well done 👏

  • Just wow ... I got shivers. Tears for those suffering, rage at the inept people that won't put a stop to it all, and a heart breaking for the families torn apart by this senseless action.

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