a cover blown of an image flown
for that power alone, it will atone
in a strange land yet so close to home
one amongst thousands but so alone
fully disguised
in a vacant look
a silly diffused
different look
a kind of blatant
complacent patent look
a bare stare,
a pretty vacant look
all those empty crystal eyed moments form
cast away like heart beats to tomorrows dawn
like many mirrored rain drops in a summer storm
a fading night brightens into a brand new morn
completely hidden
in a vacant look
out in the open
it’s a different look
out of hoping
flat lined patent look
out of fears
a pretty vacant look
.
and
About the Creator
Bren
"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa
"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend
Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler
I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!
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Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Compelling and original writing
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Comments (1)
❣️ Brilliant poem Brent!! ❣️