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By JBazPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Photo by JBaz

Oh, should I but gaze

Behind thy mystical veil

Would I glimpse heaven

After a night of pouring rain and gusting wind, we woke up to this view from our hotel window. How can you not marvel at the beauty of nature. There is a mountain completely hidden in the mist.

Thank you

Jason

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About the Creator

JBaz

I have enjoyed writing for most of my life, never professionally.

I wish to now share my stories with others, lets see where it goes.

Born and raised on the Canadian Prairies, I currently reside on the West Coast. I call both places home.

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  • Testabout a year ago

    wow lovely haiku with great emotions attached👌

  • Pamela Williamsabout a year ago

    Your view looks like heaven to me. Beautiful work.

  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    What a view! And a really beautiful haiku! Loved the transcendent question

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a year ago

    Beautiful work! what mountains range was hidden behind that thick fog?

  • Megabout a year ago

    Such a beautiful moment captured by a wonderful poem and a pretty photo!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    This is gorgeous, Jason. There's such a mysterious beauty in the pic, and your words captured the scene perfectly. Well done.

  • L.C. Schäferabout a year ago

    Gorgeous, full of wonder 😁 Hope it places!

  • Oh wow, your photo is so beautiful! Loved your Haiku as well. Also, not me trying to scramble the letters in your title to form a word before realising it's Veiled Dreams 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

  • Andrea Corwin about a year ago

    I loved this because in the PNW our winter is just like this photo! And it is heavenly here.

  • Matthew J. Frommabout a year ago

    Man this is such a great entry and the picture makes it

  • Testabout a year ago

    Ooooo! Such an eery photo and a great haiku to go with it!! You should recycle this photo for a halloween piece of some kind!!

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