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Unwitting Participants

Unwilling To Change

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read
Original Artwork: Wynter Rhoads

Our demons collaborated and took us both down,

they whispered and goaded, barely making a sound.

Then, they dove into the thoughts, we thought were safe in our heads,

they circled above us, while we tossed and turned in our beds.

They pushed and they pulled, until there was no - eye to eye,

making the outcome more vicious, it's either you or it's I.

Pitted me, like a dog, against the one that I loved,

and when given the chance, it was my heart you shoved.

Into a corner, defensive, just like in the ring of a fight,

we no longer cared who was wrong, to be right.

They picked us apart, until there was nothing left,

except for the big gaping hole, we both displayed in our chests.

No, our demons can't stand us, and the funny thing is,

we gave them the weapons to turn us into this pile of shi#*@

slam poetry

About the Creator

Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

If you like what you read, feel free to leave a tip, I would love some feedback

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  • Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock3 years ago

    Yes, we did. Where there is no rapprochement, our demons take over.

  • Omgggg, that last line is soooo true! We're our own cause of destruction!

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Wow!!! Heavy duty!! Left some love!!!❤️❤️💕

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Wow!!! Heavy duty!!@ Left some love!!!❤️❤️💕

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Wow!!! Heavy duty!!@ Left some love!!!❤️❤️💕

  • Now, this is deep. Very good job as always Kelli.

  • Mark Graham3 years ago

    Quite the poem that read like a story to me.

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