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Until They Count My Rings

a poem

By Aaron MorrisonPublished 2 months ago 1 min read
photo taken by me

My roots exposed like mangroves

Though my past provides no habitat

For anything good to thrive in

At least not from what I can see

And history carved into bark

Like the initials of sweethearts

Declaring their affections

And undying love

Who now haven’t spoken to each other in years

Failures laid bare

For anyone who cares to notice

But no one cares

Beyond a sardonic chuckle

Or flash of fickle sentiment

Yet above the tangle

There still is growth and sprouting

To varying degrees

And of subjective quality

As gnarled hands reach out

For illumination

Ceaselessly carrying a sapling’s dream

To brush the underside of Heaven

Free Verse

About the Creator

Aaron Morrison

Mad Lib it:

Born during a (___natural disaster___), Aaron spends his free time exploring (___unusual location (plural) ___) and raising domesticated (___fictional creature (plural)___).

Author of Miscellany Farrago

insta: @theaaronmorrison

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  • Mackenzie Davis2 months ago

    "To brush the underside of Heaven." Whoosh, that's an incredible line, Aaron. Beautiful read!

  • Dana Crandell2 months ago

    A very expressive piece. Good luck in the challenge!

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