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scary or something deeper
Photo by Erik Müller on Unsplash
Baby monitor—
soft laughter hums through static;
my child sleeps silent.
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That was creepy! Well.done and congrats.
Congratulations. Very creepy.
Ooof, this was creepy as hell!! A well earned winner for the haunted echoes challenge! Well done, Luna!!
Oooh yep. That's a creepy one!
Children are always the creepiest. Great job!
Luna, this is awesome, and reminds me of a real-life baby monitor tale. Congratulations on your win!❤
Yep, makes me glad I don't have to worry about baby monitors at my house! Congrats on your win!
Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
This is the fear that gets unlocked when you have a kid! Well done and congrats!
Ooh, yeah, that would be the most terrifying thing, I think, ever. Well done on your win!
👏🏾🎊This is going to scare the hell out of me. I mean look at the photo you chose. I've seen your bio. When did you change it? Your win shows that you achieved quality here. All this being said without scrolling down. I am scared okay. Don't judge me 🙈 It's about a baby. Oh gosh, no. I can only see the first line. My child sleeps silent. Peeling the bandaid off there at the end. This is a great excuse not to sleep tonight. Congratulations on your challenge win, Luna 🤗❤️🖤🎊👏🏾
Oh, that's just wrong, which makes it just right for the challenge! Congrats on the win!
congrats! this is a great one and well deserved
Chilling verse. Congratulations on your win
congratulations on your win!
Hahahahahahahhahaha as if a baby isn't scary enough, this shit has to happen 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Time to check on the baby for it's too quiet. Good job.