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O cruel amber leaves,
Fall away now! Or with whom
Shall I share this view?
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Comments (5)
Ooh interesting. As in, they want the leaves to fall so that they have company where they stand?
"Happiness is only real when shared..."
Oh my. This one I really really LOVE. Gives me a sense of lonliness. Yearning. I love how it began with you speaking tenderly to the amber leave. Speaking with pain . For the leaf to feel what you feel. To fall so that no one will look. 👌🏾👏🏾🤗❤️
I liked the emotional flow of this. Pretty imagery too!
Beautifully done, I can see this as the intro to a chapter of a book.