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Undone shall be i

forevermore yours

By Donna KPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
Undone shall be i
Photo by camilo jimenez on Unsplash

My heart pounds wild, enraptured by your flame;

Can it be true—your smile a sovereign crown?

Its light ignites the shadows, calls your name,

Yet doubt still whispers: “Undone shall be I.”

Your eyes make even night submit to you;

False is your love? Torn anew, my eyes the thought.

My soul is bared, my blood beneath your writ—

Or are you cold, a stone that scorns the day?

O treacherous queen who walks the eve alone,

My veins pour offerings, crimson at your feet.

Deceitful Delilah, will you crush my self

And leave my shattered heart to bitter beat?

None shines so bright, yet terrors hold me fast;

Take me or leave, but I am yours at last.

Sonnet

About the Creator

Donna K

I write where love and darkness intertwine in the quiet spaces where obsession is not a cage but a lantern, where madness is not an ending but a mirror. My work spirals through themes of devotion, identity, and the raw intensity being human

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