crimson sighs loosen,
gravity hums an old song—
stillness takes its bow.
Written in reflection of the Falling Leaves Challenge, held in September.
Inspired by the winning haiku “Final Waltz” by Lamar Wiggins.
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*No exaggeration* I REALLY like this one! It's tangible imagery. If it were up to me, this definitely would have been on the leaderboard. Gonna be reading it over and over... Mastery here.
Nice and beautiful haiku.
Nice baby
Great haiku!!❤️
"crimson sighs loosen,"I love that! Beautiful words 😀
Love that middle line.
Lovely hauku.
That is unequivocally how I feel during autumn; wonderfully written