Unless I am wrong, but I doubt I'm mistaken
Nothing is rarer than a heart that's never been broken
Could really do with just this one time being mistaken
Only a baby's heart could never experience being broken
Maybe you disagree, but unless I'm very much mistaken
Most baby's hearts have not experienced enough to be broken
Only as adults do we have that privilege, though maybe I'm mistaken
Not many perhaps would agree, but it is a part of life - experiencing a heart that is broken.
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Paul Stewart
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Comments (8)
So true, the broken heart has happened to us all. 💔 Left a heart. Well done
Great piece
Oooo, a heart that's never been broken is definitely rare! Beautifully written!
This is a very clever entry! And I think you just might be correct :) Wonderful job with this!
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Some good and interesting thoughts. At that there are many reasons for a heart to be broken.
Very nicely done.
So very true, lovely work :)