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Two Trees

Place of memory

By Ian VincePublished about a month ago Updated about a month ago 1 min read
Honorable Mention in Roots and Branches Challenge

A memory is a place

Where the tree curls its roots,

As the dry, rustling canopy dies,

And cries its branches, brittle-broken,

Snapped and fallen, sapless and parched, to bony earth.

The roots remember, the crown laments,

It only knows the now, the then, the never again.

In summer, it spreads its branches wide,

Forgets love lost. And love denied.

While its roots stretch even in dry ground

To sip slowly from a well of memories.

Well remembered,

The year passes, rain falls.

The roots grow far beyond the wood,

Far beyond the unfamiliarity of foreign soils,

And far beyond ‘beyond’ itself,

To where the leaf litter lies thin.

Where one tree stands alone.

A mile away in its own dry soil.

The roots recoil from tentative touch,

A frisson that almost burns is captured,

As if a spark was kindled to fire.

The roots remember what the crown forgets,

Memory has a place again.

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About the Creator

Ian Vince

Erstwhile non-fiction author, ghost & freelance writer for others, finally submitting work that floats my own boat, does my own thing. I'll deal with it if you can.

Top Writer in Humo(u)r.

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  • Marilyn Glover17 days ago

    Congratulations on your win, Ian❣ This is my favorite part: "The roots grow far beyond the wood, Far beyond the unfamiliarity of foreign soils, And far beyond ‘beyond’ itself, To where the leaf litter lies thin."👏💙

  • Beautiful Ian, Congratulations on its win!

  • Wooohooooo congratulations on your honourable mention! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Edward Swafford20 days ago

    So deserving of a place, mesmeriiiiizing imagery and flow.

  • Sandy Gillmanabout a month ago

    This is beautiful. I love the metaphor of roots remembering what the crown forgets.

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