
God seems to desert me whenever I fear
I asked Him if He could explain
He shared then a story and I shed a tear
Its message was simple and plain
“A boy and his father, a forest of trees
Tonight he’s becoming a man
There’s no one to watch him, there’s no referee’s
He’ll stay there all night per the plan
The boy is blindfolded, then put on a stump
He’ll stay here alone through the night
He’s bound to hear noises or maybe a “thump”
Unsure if it’s something to fight
He sits in the dark often tempted to peek
He hates being left on his own
His tribe does this test for the answers they seek
The tribe needs to know if he’s grown
He cannot depart ‘til the breaking of dawn
So he tries to stay quiet and still
With all the night noises his courage is gone
From the howls and occasional shrill
Who knows what the creatures are lurking about
Or what if there’s someone who’s mad
Who knows if he’ll panic and loudly cry out
Unaware of the courage he had
But then comes the morning, how happy he’ll be
The sun’s finally starting to climb
He pulls off his blindfold, astonished to see
His father was there all the time”
God ended His story, there’s tears in my eye
I knew what the message implied
Whatever the issue, my Father’s nearby
He’s always been there by my side
About the Creator
Earl W. Pearl
I’ve been writing poetry (rhyming mostly) since about 2014 and have recently transitioned to writing novels and short stories. My poetry genres are faith, humor, social issues, politics, pretty much any subject matter.
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Keep writing. Your desire to share your deep sense of a divine spirit is coming through; let the light you feel shine without your mind guiding you. Feel your way through and your message will be delivered with more eloquence. Smiles, ROCK