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Twisted Labyrinth

A response to Randy Baker’s Poetry prompt and an Inverse poem for Vocal’s Challenge.

By Chloe GilholyPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Twisted Labyrinth
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A slave to your twisted labyrinth

I don’t believe that I am

Worthy of the best

I whisper to the cascade mirror

What a shock this is going to be

The velvet lies you’ve screamed before

You tell me I am ugly

What you serenade in letters

I do not believe

You are wrong

As ethereal as you want me to be

An chained enigma, perhaps

I am not your perfect Labyrinth Angel

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I am not your perfect Labyrinth Angel

A chained enigma, perhaps

As ethereal as you want me to be

You are wrong

I do not believe

What you serenade in letters

You tell me I am ugly

The velvet lies you’ve screamed before

What a shock this is going to be

I whisper to the cascade mirror

Worthy of the best

I don’t believe that I am

A slave to your twisted labyrinth

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About the Creator

Chloe Gilholy

I live in Oxfordshire, England. I used to write a lot of fan fiction and mainly just write poetry now. I've been to over 20 countries and written many books. I'm currently working on a horror story called Heavenly Seas.

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  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Fantastic!!! Loved it!!♥️♥️💕

  • Novel Allen2 years ago

    I dream of travelling to many more countries, love your poetry and the free spirit of positivity. Happy travels.

  • Whoaaaa, you executed this soooo brilliantly! It works so well both ways!

  • Oh, wow, you knocked out two challenges with one stone! Excellent work!

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    Perfect response to both challenges. This is truly amazing. Well done.

  • Paul Levinson2 years ago

    Outstanding! "Labyrinth" was the one word I didn't use in my response to Randy's challenge. Good for you getting it in the title, as well the beginning and the end, perfect for a labyrinth.

  • Paul Stewart2 years ago

    Oh bravo, Chloe! Love that you used Randy's prompt and concocted an entry for the Inverse challenge too. Both versions are very powerful, especially the reverse! Great work, loved it!

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