Outside the cold pane of glass,
lawns are softened and outlined in white
as the sun struggles to shake off
the night, yawning and stretching
and grumbling at its too-bright awakening.
Up and down the shadowed street,
motors rumble in darkness-tinged dawn,
plumes of sour-smelling gas rising straight upwards
like foggy prayers for a warmer tomorrow.
Neighbors nod in greeting en route
to their eight-hour day in a box, bleak and lonely,
to sate the unending appetite of mortgages,
electricity bills, and charity of giving thanks.
The creeping gray skies are daydreaming
about snowflakes, the cut of wind across
cheeks like a katana’s kiss that withers
the false promise of pumpkin spice lingering
too long into the sales of a fraying season.
Our snow shovels are ready, even if we are not—
garden hoses coiled and stowed in locked sheds,
rows of bikes stored neatly in garage racks,
and the slow march of decorations unwound from dusty
crates, ready to shine again. We’ve found treasures can
abound in the anticipation of frozen miracles
and memories we’ve chosen to recall in the sharp
scent of pine rosin and ginger cookies and woodsmoke
rising through the chilled afternoon as it’s turning
toward another night, bringing us closer to year’s end.
About the Creator
Alison McBain
Alison McBain writes fiction & poetry, edits & reviews books, and pens a webcomic called “Toddler Times.” In her free time, she drinks gallons of coffee & pretends to be a pool shark at her local pub. More: http://www.alisonmcbain.com/
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Really liked this one! I am so not ready for winter...LOL
🤩 Really enjoyed this, Allison.