Watch what you can do.
Waves sent to drown you in you.
Step out of that boat.
About the Creator
Colleen Walters
Just a girl who likes to write poems, usually inspired by events and people in my Florida life.. Always be you, because you are awesome. You matter. You are enough.. ❤️
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Comments (6)
Ooh, twisty, thought-provoking!!
Amazing
True, one of my favourite bible stories! :)
Peter is such a symbol of how we are to step out on the water.
Sometimes the world would be magical. Liked it.
An interesting concept in your short and sweet haiku. Multiple interpretations.