T here lived a girl who used to trust magi C
R ed lips and his kiss— love a timeless stic H
U niverse was hers all— her smile a grac E
S he trusted love but he shattered her aur A
T rust was then broken—deceived by a chea T
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Till next time,
Maryam
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(Yes, I stole Calvin London's style! But I love the vibe of saying 'Till next time'. Sorry, Sir )
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Maryam Batool
I'm 17
I'm a storyteller who loves poems, fiction, and romance. Creativity is my constant companion. I take joy in turning thoughts into worlds. Writing is my way of exploring life and connecting with others
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Maryam - do you want to write part 3 for this story? https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/a-new-life-up-in-the-air-bu140lbt%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E I wrote part one and then Colleen wrote part two and we need somebody to write part three if you’re interested.
Amazing poem! I love the way you expressed your ideas and emotions on this incredible work of art!
This poem is powerful and evocative! It beautifully conveys the journey from trust to heartbreak, using vivid imagery and emotion. The play on words adds an extra layer of depth to this heart-wrenching experience.
It's really impressive that you accomplished this, it's very interesting, indeed.
I feel deep heartbreak 💔 when I read this. It’s beautiful the way you formatted the words to convey brokenness.
Ooh! This is beautiful and deep. It vividly portrays love and betrayal. This acrostic poem is truly wonderful✨
Oh wow, a double Acrostic! Mike has done so many of these. You guys make it seem so effortless! I loved yours so much!
Ah ha - plagiarism! 😊😜😉😁 I am surprized you have only just noticed. I have always signed off all my stories with this tag line. This is great Maryam, I must try one of these poetry styles - you have taught me something new and given me a new challenge - thank you. Great poem by the way, very cleverly done and a nice sentiment behind it.
It is , in sense , a little more meaningful very good Batool
Clever writing! I love it. Well done!
Double acrostics are a fun challenge. Well done!
What a neat little poem! I love the way you’ve spun that "trust" theme—super clever! ✨ It speaks of love’s fragility and betrayal, with a strong emotional pull. A cool mix of wordplay and emotion. Nice one!💖😊
Awesome poem. Love the structure.
Clever play with the words here 😉 Trusting a cheater gives pain and shatters the heart.
Well Done!!! I have become interested in different types of poetry. Beautifully Done!!!
Beautiful ❤️
oooo clever and beautiful 💙
Awesome Acrostic. Love how you formatted it
That’s amazing. I never tried this type of poetry before. ♦️♦️♦️♦️