Photo by Martha Bergmann on Unsplash
A love that followed me every time
I practised Love as I practised RHYME
They find it strange to love unknown!
'To keep love pure'-- Is it a crime?
.
.
.
What do you think?
You can share your different perspectives 'bout it ...
About the Creator
Maryam Batool
I'm 17
I'm a storyteller who loves poems, fiction, and romance. Creativity is my constant companion. I take joy in turning thoughts into worlds. Writing is my way of exploring life and connecting with others
Ready to let my writing bloom!
Keep reading
More stories from Maryam Batool and writers in Poets and other communities.
Comments (2)
Awww! This one’s pretty intriguing! The way you connect love with rhyme is so creative, like it’s something you’ve worked on and perfected. The idea of loving the unknown feels mysterious, and you flip the question of purity into something thought-provoking. It’s short but opens up a lot of interesting perspectives on love—nice job!
"Your lines are wonderful, sister! They express an interesting idea, especially the notion of loving the unknown, which is often seen as strange by society. Pablo Picasso once said, 'Love is a true perspective, and we all experience it in our art.' Your final line truly poses a philosophical question. I believe that by maintaining the purity of love, one can be freed from even the worst of crimes. It just needs to be true and pure. Keeping love sacred is not a crime at all. Rather, it is a wonderful feeling that occurs only when our soul is being liberated from evil.'"