Treasure From The Start
^<>^<>^ •=+=+=+=• ^<>^<>^
You are a 💎 JEWEL
a GEM
You’re everything
I wish to WIN
You are an 🌊O 🌊 C🌊 E 🌊 A 🌊 N
for my heart, a stirring POTION
You’re the WIND-TOUCH to my SKIN
and the COLOR to my emotional BLEND
You’re the RHYTHM to my BLUES
and the FEATHERS to my SHOES
You caught the dripping WAX
of my tired, TAXED soul
and held it as TREASURE from the START
You’re an ELLIPSIS and a SEMICOLON,
not a period
You’re a MYRIAD of WISDOM and rolling / / /
WONDER
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Rowan Finley
Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.
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I love this! I agree with Komal, that is a tat line. (Change you to I) in my humble opinion
“Ellipsis and a semicolon” got me grinning—now that’s a grammarian’s way of saying to someone that you’re not done yet! ✨
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