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Transcendent Touch

a poem

By Kayleigh Fraser ✨Published 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
Transcendent Touch
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I take your hand in mine,

First to the grassy lands

Sit, I say, guiding your body

Just be, here, with me

and feel,

Feel.

And think

if you can,

Of what is true

Of what is real

.

May I touch your skin,

Alien?

May I caress you

Metaphorically undress you?

Can you convey

as we play

What you feel

as we question

Is this true?

Is this real?

.

Does life entail an inhale

Alien?

Do the sweet scents

become memory accents?

Are you revealing

the healing

that’s woven into

the appealing

Feeling

of your hand, in mine?

.

Do your eyes, recognise

the stars and planets

in the skies?

What do you name

these burning flames

of creation?

Do you have an

explanation

for the sensation

of your hand, in mine?

.

Do you know how I glow

on the inside?

Can you feel and reveal

secrets

of my heart,

the art

that is me

as I experience glee

from the key

of your hand, in mine?

.

May I hear your thoughts

Alien?

Will you offer to share

or dare to declare

If you have feelings

of care?

Can we pursue a review

as we question

Is this real?

Is this true?

.

Are you glad of your landing

Alien?

Are you understanding

or are my questions

too demanding?

Are you perceiving

and receiving

my earthly gift to you

Of what is real

Of what is true?

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About the Creator

Kayleigh Fraser ✨

philosopher, alchemist, writer & poet with a spirit of fire & passion for all things health & love related 💫

“Darkness to me is like water to the sea”

INSTAGRAM - kayzfraser

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  • Jazzy 2 years ago

    This was so well done! I am in awe of how much love you exude in your poems and even with this challenge you managed to convey love, warmth and understanding all in one!!

  • Paul Stewart2 years ago

    I have to say I was not aware that this was for the challenge until you brought the alien in. I thought it was a very beautiful and romantic poem to a friend/lover/partner...So...that surprised me. As usual, you find me thinking about changing hobbies (joke) cos your poetry is just too good! Well done on this one, Kayleigh. Exquisite and wonderfully paced as usual!

  • L.C. Schäfer2 years ago

    Ah, to show them human love. What a gift. Bit kinky, but lovely ❤

  • Awww, you're like so sweet and caring to the alien! This was so wonderful!

  • ThatWriterWoman2 years ago

    Beautiful. I love how this is packed full of questions for the visitor!

  • Trip L.2 years ago

    I love how simple, yet deeeeppp, this is. Well done!

  • Masibat Zadah2 years ago

    Beautifully written! It definitely pulled on the heartstrings! 🙌🏾🔥

  • Beautiful poem! Heartfelt! 💙😍

  • Beautiful ❤️

  • Priya2 years ago

    really nice!

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