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Surreal Monday

By Silver DauxPublished 3 months ago 1 min read
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Photo by Thomas Lake on Unsplash

Do you dream

With your ear

Pressed to the

Icy metal tracks?

Or is it your throat

That you lay against

The frozen line of metal

Stretching into the wintery

Land covered in ice and snow?

.

Do you wait for moaning horn

Crying its laments through the

Conifers gazing skyward through

Endless feet of crushing, wet snow?

No, there is no pre-emptive mourning.

Not for you, for the creature that's pulse

Quickens with the galloping approach of

Death and her chariot of bloodthirsty horses,

Stallions dragging misfortune down the roads

Until every fool is on their knees begging for the

Tracks that you have so expertly claimed for yourself.

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About the Creator

Silver Daux

Shadowed souls, cursed magic, poetry that tangles itself in your soul and yanks out the ugly darkness from within. Maybe there's something broken in me, but it's in you too.

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  • K.B. Silver 3 months ago

    This is so great. I love the format you chose, it intensifies the building pace and frenetic energy. It's like a chase down the lines.

  • Oooo, those last four lines were my favourite!

  • Very powerful and descriptive words.

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