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Tormented Soul

A poem on the soul

By Jason “Jay” BenskinPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Tormented Soul
Photo by Yaopey Yong on Unsplash

She’s bound by chains too heavy to escape,

Alive, yet caught in life’s unyielding snare.

Morals and ethics, like a tightening rope,

She weighs the cost of slipping from despair.

Hell’s flames draw near, a whisper at her feet,

Her weary heart still yearns for love’s warm light.

But passion, if embraced without restraint,

Would cast her soul into eternal night.

She dreams of solace in a sacred place,

To seek forgiveness on a bended knee,

Or crush her heart, suppressing every trace

Of longing’s voice, so fierce and wild, yet free.

Torn between the clash of right and wrong,

She’s tempted by a lover’s whispered song.

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About the Creator

Jason “Jay” Benskin

Crafting authored passion in fiction, horror fiction, and poems.

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Outstanding

Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!

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  1. Easy to read and follow

    Well-structured & engaging content

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    Original narrative & well developed characters

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  • ReadShakurrabout a year ago

    So creative

  • Esala Gunathilakeabout a year ago

    Nice poem. Excellent going.

  • Kale Sinclairabout a year ago

    Love the flow and the rhyme schemes, Jason. Well done.

  • Gloria Penelopeabout a year ago

    You have a great talent, Dr. Jay. Through your writing in this lovely poem, you painted a woman who is bound by chains and grapples with morals and ethics, weighing the cost of escaping despair. She yearns for love but fears passion could cast her soul into eternal darkness. She dreams of solace, seeking forgiveness, or suppressing longing, torn between right and wrong. Another powerful piece. I enjoyed reading it!

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