
go on then show me how
he said in a mocking tone
i didn’t want a part of it
preferring to be left alone
so he let me get the better of myself
and i quickly rose to the bait
my heart wasn't really in it all
but i gave it to him straight
you don’t know what you’re on about
or what any of this really for
you’re like a made for tv movie extra
that only made it to the cutting room floor
i confidently continued my diatribe
forcefully bitter i pressed the attack
my tongue lashed, whip like and frenzied
as it flicked from the front to the back
his bottom lip it trembled and quivered
and then it trembled some more
he twitched winced coughed and farted
as it became clear that THIS was the SCORE!
then it was his turn to look at me
confusion made him squint his eyes
it came to him as many things
and the least of all was surprise
there wasn't any substance to the man
just a jellyfish with a spine
i looked him up i looked him down
and shook my head one more time
i know you, you sneaky rat fuck
and of your reluctance to reveal your intentions
but if you're half as smart as you think you are
use plethora in a sentence
About the Creator
Bren
"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa
"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend
Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler
I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!
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Comments (4)
𝐲𝐞𝐚𝐡! 🖤
haha...this was great. So much snarl and bite to it. This line made me laugh "you’re like a made for tv movie extra...that only made it to the cutting room floor" - such a great line and this one too - "there wasn't any substance to the man, just a jellyfish with a spine" and love the "sneaky rat fuck" insult and use of plethora.
At least he has a spine...? 😁
I found a plethora of things to like about this poem. Nice job