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Tongue Ties

and tied to the tongue

By BrenPublished 3 years ago 1 min read

go on then show me how

he said in a mocking tone

i didn’t want a part of it

preferring to be left alone

so he let me get the better of myself

and i quickly rose to the bait

my heart wasn't really in it all

but i gave it to him straight

you don’t know what you’re on about

or what any of this really for

you’re like a made for tv movie extra

that only made it to the cutting room floor

i confidently continued my diatribe

forcefully bitter i pressed the attack

my tongue lashed, whip like and frenzied

as it flicked from the front to the back

his bottom lip it trembled and quivered

and then it trembled some more

he twitched winced coughed and farted

as it became clear that THIS was the SCORE!

then it was his turn to look at me

confusion made him squint his eyes

it came to him as many things

and the least of all was surprise

there wasn't any substance to the man

just a jellyfish with a spine

i looked him up i looked him down

and shook my head one more time

i know you, you sneaky rat fuck

and of your reluctance to reveal your intentions

but if you're half as smart as you think you are

use plethora in a sentence

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About the Creator

Bren

"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa

"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend

Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler

I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!

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  • Test3 years ago

    𝐲𝐞𝐚𝐡! 🖤

  • Paul Stewart3 years ago

    haha...this was great. So much snarl and bite to it. This line made me laugh "you’re like a made for tv movie extra...that only made it to the cutting room floor" - such a great line and this one too - "there wasn't any substance to the man, just a jellyfish with a spine" and love the "sneaky rat fuck" insult and use of plethora.

  • L.C. Schäfer3 years ago

    At least he has a spine...? 😁

  • I found a plethora of things to like about this poem. Nice job

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