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Today You Would be 71

Happy Birthday, Mama

By Mother CombsPublished 12 months ago 1 min read

If you were still here

Things would be so clear

Everything would fall into place

Because tears wouldn’t be on my face

You’d be mad at me for telling a bad pun

But daily we’d have so much fun

We would go for a scenic drive

Or we would turn on the radio and jive

Now and then we’d sneak a beer

And we’d make up a Cowboy cheer

The memories we could enjoy

As we try out new foods like bok choy

If only you were still here today

You’d be celebrating another birthday

Instead, you left me with so much trauma

I sure do miss you, Mama

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Mother Combs

Come near, sit a spell, and listen to tales of old as I sit and rock by my fire. I'll serve you some cocoa and cookies as I tell you of the time long gone by when your Greats-greats once lived.

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  • Ina Zeneli12 months ago

    I am so sorry for your loss. Mom will always be your shoulder to cry on, now and forever.

  • I can only imagine how difficult today must be for you 🥺 Sending you lots of love and hugs ❤️ Happy Birthday to Mama Combs in heaven 🥺❤️

  • Denise E Lindquist12 months ago

    I can relate to missing mama.❤️ My mom would be 90 and it has been 15 years.❤️

  • C. Rommial Butler12 months ago

    A well-wrought and lovely homage!

  • Tiffany Gordon12 months ago

    Aww... I'm sorry for your loss mother. This piece really tugs on the heart strings. What a gorgeous tribute to a beautiful woman! 💖

  • Lana V Lynx12 months ago

    This is so heartbreaking, Sharon, but at the same time warm and beautiful. I can't imagine your pain, and my first thought was, "71 is so young to leave this world!"

  • Oh how the world changes is that your mom. Beautiful poem, beautiful

  • Marie381Uk 12 months ago

    Awe love, I feel your pain 🙏✍️🌹🌹🌹

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