To wish upon
Sky-ku
By Lamar WigginsPublished about a year ago • Updated about a year ago • 1 min read
Image by Enrique Meseguer From Pixabay
oceans of light—sketch
of a distant past, fraught with
whispered desires
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Lamar Wiggins
Creative writer in the Northeast US who loves the paranormal, mystery, true crime, horror, humor, fantasy and poetry.
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Hi Lamar! My insights aren’t working because I’m using my iPhone. They still glitch. I can only add when I borrow my friends iPad. I tell you this because I would have chosen every one - from Outstanding right through to Masterful Proofreading. I can deeply relate to this poem. It reminds me of some of the ideas I was trying to explore but was grapping with - and at the same time learning how to write a Haiku. A favourite line? All of them: ‘oceans of light—sketch of a distant past, fraught with whispered desires’ Thank you for witing and inspiring me! Pauline 🌸
Lovely!
Tantalizing and such great description with so few words!! I love it, Lamar!!
This has quite an allure to it just like those "whispered desires"! Fantastic work, Lamar!
I do like how you lifted the ocean up to the sky 🥰
Omgggg, I love all three lines so much! Oceans of light, distant past, whispered desires. They were all so brilliant!
Wow!! Wonderful piece!!
So gorgeous, Lamar :)
So lovely, Lamar. So few words say so much.
Wow, Lamar! Beautiful, deep and filled with longing. Everything one could desire of a poem long or short. I hope this is a contender. It certainly is in my mind.
Aw Lamar, this is just stunning x C x
Ancient light from distance sources. Beutiful.
Gorgeous work, my friend. Well done..
Breathtaking and the first I have read that brings in the dimension of time. Nicely done Lamar
Oh wow, Lamar, this is stunning! Just beautiful!
What a hauntingly lovely haiku. Well done, Lamar.
Beautiful
Hauntingly Beautiful!
Nice work, Lamar. I wonder what those whispered desire may be