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To Soon

A.H. Mittelman

By Alex H Mittelman Published 2 years ago 1 min read
To Soon
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She kicked Tim out to soon, this made his mind go boom.

He was only eighteen and hadn’t even finished high school yet. This was a tragedy created by a malicious mother with no conscience or sympathy he could get.

If his father was still alive, his house he could arrive. At first he cried and cried, then decided he was just glad to be alive.

He made his way to a shelter, it was crowded and hot. He still appreciated his life a lot.

He kept thinking positive and applied to college. They gave him a scholarship so he could learn more knowledge.

He graduated with a masters in business and got a loan to start his own. Not once did any of his professors hear him whine or moan.

He became a billionaire at thirty and his mother finally called him. He told her she was horrible and to go drink some more gin. She promised she did not live her life in sin.

She begged him for forgivness and he said it’s to little to late. You had twelve years to call me, and now it’s you I hate.

He hung up the phone and blocked her number. She just wanted to take his money while he lay in slumber.

He never spoke to her again and accomplished many more great things. His company is now international, and he flys around the world for his business flings.

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About the Creator

Alex H Mittelman

I love writing and just finished my first novel. Writing since I was nine. I’m on the autism spectrum but that doesn’t stop me! If you like my stories, click the heart, leave a comment. Link to book: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0CQZVM6WJ

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  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Awesome!!! Love your inspirational poem!!!💕❤️❤️

  • I'm so glad he didn't forgive his mom. She deserved that!

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