To Fairweather Friends
Real Poetic's Spilt Milk Challenge Entry
To fairweather friends
I hate how needy I was
I hate how I hung around
Hoping
Waiting
You would invite me here
You would invite me there
Monday mornings of sadness
When you all spoke candidly
About the weekend's events
When I was sat at home
Where was my invite?
I was the afterthought
I was the forgotten
I kept it all in
I kept my sadness
Who would care anyway?
Who would care?
Let it take up space
Inside
Where it took up residency
Became part of me
Never the best friend
Always the one you called
When noone else is available
When I'm there and you can't get rid
Thank you, fairweather friends
For everything you taught me
About friendship
And my importance
Thank you, thank you
Though I hope you realise
I mean a different word
Not thanks
But now I'm older
I've got no more of those to give
For you
Fairweather Friends.
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Thanks for reading.
This is for Real Poetic's Spilt Milk Challenge. During my later years at school and when I went to college, I did not have the most positive experience always, as I was always overlooked and wasn't treated properly like one of the gang among the other students on my course.
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Comments (12)
So sad that you experienced that, Paul! I love this expressive piece, and glad you were able to write about it! You are a gem and I cannot imagine anyone treating you that way! So happy to see this on the winners list! Congrats, friend!
Wonderfully said. Congrats!
Very relatable poetry 🥰You know what I do if I was not invited to a party. I make my own party and invite everyone who wanted to come .
Omgggg, I experienced the same exact freaking thing! And it's soooo hurtful! I'm so sorry you had to go through that too 🥺
I’m sad to hear this was your experience. This piece was really poignant and powerful though with a superb msg, & we all obviously think you are rad oh zen master/dark side Paul !! 😃
Once again, you've captured my heart & soul, Paul. There have been a few times in my life when friends sought me out consistently, especially when I was in college & during the three years of my first appointment to a two point charge. But for the most part, including all my years growing up, I've been the afterthought, not even the fifth wheel but more like the tire bouncing down the road heading for the ditch. I wish the best for you, my friend. You are one of the bright lights here on Vocal & you deserve that same consideration you already pay to so many others.
I’m sorry that was your experience. I don’t think I ever told you this, but I’m actually trying to manifest an American version of you to be best friends with. I had a falling out with my best friend in 2021 because she just was not good for me. I started having actual nightmares about it, it was so stressful. I’ve been cautious to let anyone in my life at all these past few years, because I’ve been working on myself. But I’ve been thinking about how cool it would be to have a writer friend like you to grab coffee with sometimes. Preferably someone married, because I wanna get married too, and not have that be an issue like it would’ve been for my former best bud. Anyways, it was truly their loss.
Awesome job Paul! I strongly strongly dislike fair weather friends! They truly missed out on a Kool person!
I’ve been treated like that my whole life! Good work!
Yeah, buddy! Well done. And I think I know the word.
This is a great entry to the challenge. It’s their loss that they overlooked you. Well-done.
They are the losers. Horrible people.