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To all the girls who couldn't hang

I was inspired by my feelings when I read Lena Dunham's Instagram comment about her New Yorker piece: "I couldn't hang. I still can't hang. Click the link in the bio to hear more about how extremely I can't hang."

By Cali LoriaPublished 9 months ago 1 min read
Runner-Up in Tattoo This Line Challenge
To all the girls who couldn't hang
Photo by Ezi on Unsplash

From dial tones

to dial

up

that screen name

meant to

click

bait

trap

we daughters

of the 90's

sexualized

with

American

girl

doll

dread

there's no private

in these

parts

taught to

read

write

arithme

tic

tac

toe

games

where

girls

go

wild

and where

the wild

things

are

you

may

never

know

taught to make

men

hunger

while

we

goldilocks

going par

for the

porridge

not too

thin

not too

fat

just sweet

enough

to eat you up

I

loathe

you

so

far

gone

by the time

they brought

guns

into school

we had

music

media

Marilyn

Monroe

maybe

killed

herself

because she

couldn't

hang.

celebrities

About the Creator

Cali Loria

Over punctuating, under delivering.

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  • Dalma Ubitz8 months ago

    This was amazing! I really liked your piece 💕 congrats on the win

  • Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Kendall Defoe 9 months ago

    This is very effective... And A F F E C T I V E !

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