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Time will Reveal

I'm completely different than before and this version I am Loving me more...

By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 2 years ago โ€ข 1 min read
Top Story - November 2023
Time will Reveal
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I lost you

A long time ago,

however, now you have returned to me...

I wish it stood a better moment,

For me to get caught up in a moment, with you.

Painstakingly, I spoke out Farewell to what was supposed to be eternal...๐Ÿฅน๐Ÿ“โค๏ธ

The strings on my soul have been clipped and now my heart operates unsystematically free...

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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)

โ€œ Public Diary, of an Urban Poet

๐ŸŽ‰I am an Actor, Model, Writer, and Entrepreneur โค๏ธโค๏ธ๐Ÿ™

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  • Yusuf Alam2 years ago

    ๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘ŒLonzo BIG BREAKTHROUGH! Scientists Finally Created an ARTIFICIAL BRAIN in LAB https://shopping-feedback.today/01/big-breakthrough-scientists-finally-created-an-artificial-brain-in-lab%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cstyle data-emotion-css="w4qknv-Replies">.css-w4qknv-Replies{display:grid;gap:1.5rem;}

  • Amazing work Lonzo.

  • Grz Colm2 years ago

    Nice work on your top story Lonzo! ๐Ÿ˜

  • Waseem Chem2 years ago

    Great work

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story!

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    Beautiful. I just love the ending. Congrats on the TS.

  • RP2 years ago

    Back to say congrats! ๐Ÿ’•

  • Donna Renee2 years ago

    You are such a soulful poet, every time.... love this one โคโคโค

  • So truly relatable and painful ๐Ÿ˜– very well written friend!

  • Sugan Ya 2 years ago

    Nice piece...

  • Chloe Gilholy2 years ago

    This was lovely

  • The tragedy of poor timing.

  • Dana Crandell2 years ago

    Nothing like a fresh start with a new attitude. Nice one, Lonzo!

  • Mark Graham2 years ago

    Beautiful.

  • RP2 years ago

    Aww ๐Ÿฅน๐Ÿฉต

  • "Now my heart operates unsystemically free" Whoaaaa, that line blew my mind! Loved your poem!

  • Mariann Carroll2 years ago

    You can tell by your poem that you are a passionate person. Itโ€™s hard to take it slow. The heart grow fonder when you take it slow. The ice cream taste better if you eat it slow.

  • Test2 years ago

    Very creative and powerful Handsomelouii. Well done!

  • Tiffany Gordon2 years ago

    Very empowering!

  • Test2 years ago

    Absolutely fantastic poem. I Love that

  • Lamar Wiggins2 years ago

    Pretty deep, bro! Loved it!!!

  • Mother Combs2 years ago

    beautiful๐Ÿ’™

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Lovely!!!๐Ÿ’•โค๏ธโค๏ธ

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