You've been in the dark too long, my friend.
You've been hiding out all on your own.
Now, your self-destructive ways must end.
I am here to prove you're not alone.
*
Though you're feeling down and black as night,
And that hope is nothing but a dream,
And that nothing good will come to light,
Just remember, sparks may later gleam.
*
Now, your gloomy paradigm must shift.
Now, you start your journey from the clouds.
With my offer of a gentle lift,
You may find the light your darkness shrouds.
*
Do you feel the lightness? Cross that line.
When you smile, you glow. It's time to shine.
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Julie Lacksonen
Julie has been a music teacher at a public school in Arizona since 1987. She enjoys writing, reading, walking, swimming, and spending time with family.
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I love the spark of hope your poem offers.
The photo is stunning and your words match.
Beautiful. Brought a tear to my eye
Lovely, and a perfect match to your brother's photo
This is beautiful and poignant. I felt so drawn in. Stunning syntax.
love this!
Dear Julie- Thank you for the compliment re; “Meer-Words” as inspired by my BritBuds. As I’ve been scrolling through your marvelous offerings, I’m so glad that I’ve just discovered another ‘Original’ Author *I’ve subscribed with pleasure! Jay Kantor, Chatsworth, California
This is a wonderful sonnet (one of my favourite forms) great words
This is a beautiful reminder that even in darkness, light can find its way in.
This was so beautiful and uplifting. Loved your poem! Also, the word "that" is repeated in this line: "Do you feel the lightness? Cross that that line."