“Time-shifting”:
Cascading cache,
Falling through the endless sky -
Privy eyes only.
-2023
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Grz Colm
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Christmas Tree
Christmas tree curbside done with living room season waiting for trash truck. I don't even put a Christmas tree in the living room. But when I see the trees on the curb, near the trash bin, waiting for pickup, it makes me sad. Maybe I see a metaphor in it, the way it is discarded when the season is over.
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The Ritual of Winter Challenge Winners
Welcome to the Winners Announcement for The Ritual of Winter challenge. This prompt focused on winter rituals and the meaning that settles into them over time. The top pieces stay grounded in ordinary acts and repeated routines, letting winter shape the work through pace, attention, and restraint.
By Vocal Curation Team3 days ago in Resources
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I'm not sure what you intend with this, Grz, but what I catch from it is the changing of the seasons, but only for those who see. Thought-provoking, even if I'm way off on it.
I missed this one. Wow! weird.
So glad Paul gave this one a shout out, otherwise I might have missed it!
That's how you use brevity to convey such big messages in few words. Well done on this, pal.
Luv this!
Brilliant use of imageries and very beautifully written!