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I have a time card,
reserved in Heaven for me,
clock in time awaits.
Thank you for reading,
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Moe Radosevich
I am always touched when something I write touches another so if any of you my fellow creators have been touched thank you
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Comments (5)
Very nicely done.
This spoke volumes to me. When I lost my dad, all I could say when I kissed his cheek was "Rest now, your work on earth is done." He happily punched his time card in Heaven. Love this!
I really like this one! I’d say more but honestly I just think it speaks for itself. Well done.
Very good. Is the last comma intentional? I hope it is, gives the piece the unfinished feel caused by time coming due...
Just an awesome haiku!! We'll done!