Through the Window, 2:30 PM
An acrostic written for the "Dancing with Distraction" challenge, inspired by my school days.
Did you find what you were looking for
In the
Sway of the
Trees? Or did you simply
Recover your senses,
Allow the
Curling balloon strands of
Thought to recoil
Into the snug corners
Of your mind?
No is a complete answer.
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Comments (23)
I love the image you paint! This was excellent!
Excellent work
Well deserved placing. Gorgous work.
love it
Wow I loved this. A very intriguing thought provoking piece. Congrats on your win very well deserved
Such a wonderful poem– an experience to read with a brilliant finish. Loved it and so happy to see it as a winning piece! Congrats!
I love that last line, as thought the speaker is annoyed and judging the “you” for being distracted. Yet the overall effect is quite a surreal beauty. Well done! And congratulations on second place! 🎊
Congrats on second place!
Chills, 'no is a complete answer'.
Congrats on your win, Suze. This is simply gorgeous. ❤️
Wow! I love this entry and see why it was recognized. Congrats on placing in the challenge. 💖🥇🥳
Simplicity seems to be the order of the day. Simple words which convey so very much. Congrats on your win.
Congratulations!!!
Awesome ✨ 🎉😉Congratulations🎉
Superb. This is such a deserving winner. Congratulations!
Beautiful, Suze! Congrats on this stunning poem and your win!
Wonderful piece. Congrats
A very deep breath and it feels like it hit a plaintive note that’s hard to swallow. A truly poignant experience here💓well done 👏🏅congratulations 🎉
Congratulations. Tremendous last line!! ❤
I love that last line. No is a complete answer, no need for explanation to follow or overthinking. “Curling balloon strands of thought” is a gorgeous turn of phrase.
Really enjoy this. Your writing style is like listening to a favorite song and finding new components and sounds to it each time it plays. This is a great piece!
Excellent!
GREAT WORK !!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT .....