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I may not see everything
the way someone else does
I may notice things that seem
insignificant or
unremarkable
to someone else
they say the eyes are
the window to the soul
and they are
a portal to what lays
hidden from view
I wish you could see
you
through my eyes
just once
you would see
Light
kindness
humility
consideration
thoughtfulness
empathy
determination
selflessness
Godliness
a Creative
humor
compassion
integrity
a conscience
generosity
a bountiful mind
and a beautiful heart
just some of the things I see
you'd be surprised
because you would see
the real you
if you could see
you
through my eyes.
About the Creator
Colleen Walters
Just a girl who likes to write poems, usually inspired by events and people in my Florida life.. Always be you, because you are awesome. You matter. You are enough.. β€οΈ
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Awww, this was so sweet and beautiful! Loved it so much! πππππ
This is very touching, I agree with Aarsh. Itβs such a gift to be able to see and appreciate the beauty in others.
This really touched me. I imagined someone reading this about themselves and feeling seen for the first time. It reminded me how powerful kind perception can be.