Chased the thrill too far,
called it WONDER, called it FATE,
now the hole calls back.
About the Creator
Komal
I write poems and stories that hit the feels.
When I’m not lost in my own plots, I’m either daydreaming about the next big idea or just winging life with a grin.
𝕀 𝕙𝕒𝕧𝕖 𝕥𝕙𝕖 ℙ𝕠𝕨𝕖𝕣 𝕥𝕠 𝕞𝕒𝕜𝕖 𝕒𝕟 𝕀𝕄ℙ𝔸ℂ𝕋
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Center Stage with Gina C.
*** I'm keen to republish the interviews I did for my series with Vocal creators. It's been a few years and I thought it might be nice to revisit these wonderful conversations. I'll be releasing them one at a time for a few weeks/months.
By Heather Hubler5 days ago in Interview
Comments (17)
Such a tight evocative poem it’s amazing how much emotion is packed in so few words.
Wow! Now that's thrilling indeed!
I won't lie, this picture tried to freak me out a wee bit lol 😵💫😬 It says "adventure and risk wrapped with a sparkly bow for good measure "
Yikes!! Chase something too far, and one gets swallowed up in it. They call that...obsession! Well done Komal!!! Well said, my friend.
Well-wrought! Indeed, stare long into the abyss and it stares into you, eh?
Thought provoking
I love how you’ve captured that mix of awe and danger that comes with chasing something too far.
Getting swallowed up in dream huh?
I’m curious what inspired this exactly?
A great haiku. - Well Done.
Makes me wonder what will happen next!
The picture really makes that last line pop.
A great haiku. The danger zone.
Very smart! I like it so much!
Your haiku feels very apt and timely for the modern life, Thrill chasing really is risky, aside from the possibility of tempting one into physical danger, it just makes peace and contentment seem boring. Great poem!
So much in so few words. Excellent Haiku!
Dangerous! Nicely Done