Threads of Life
Embracing the Music of Happiness and Sadness
We see how life's threads are all woven together in the dance of dawn and dusk.
A music of happiness and sadness,
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Every note is a win or a loss.
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Through narrow trails and deep valleys,
We go on, and our lies stay safe.
The bright fields and clear nights,
Tell stories of laughing, tears, and saying goodbye.
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Hey, life! You weave your magic thread through every unspoken word, every dream that comes true, and every wrong that is made right.
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Take in the storm, the peace, the fire,
Accept the nudges of desire, because this brief, precious time is when we understand who we really are.
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So enjoy the present and live it fully, in every breath and action, because life is a song, wild and free.
A work of art that everyone can see.
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Comments (6)
You really have a talent in writing. I am impressed
Well-crafted piece
Amazing read! Looking forward for more from you
Thanks for sharing. Very well written
Enjoyed this.
Lovely - take in the storm, the peace, the fire. Great poem!