Things Said About Chocolate
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"Dip it in chocolate," they said.
"It’ll be fun," they said.
"Sweet, sexy deliciousness," they said. Exact words. "Spice things up." S-u-u-u-r-r-e.
They also said, "Put plastic sheets down."
"Recharge obligatory marital conjugations"…or something along those lines.
Actually sooo enthusiastic, we forgot 'appropo' footwear.
Clear where this is going, huh? *Laugh and I’ll whack you with my reading glasses*
True humiliation lies in EMS staff arriving for butt-naked sixty-somethings encased in chocolate and stuck in a compromised position convulsing
In agony (not the noun we were shooting for) and unable to stand due to: query hip and/or knee dislocations, multiple lacerations, and contusions.
'Oh no' moments captured in painstaking add humiliating detail.
Never mind if you have the best of intentions. Think behind-the-scenes muted comic relief by healthcare professionals whenever you wanna be…you know…adventurous. And "Don’t do it," she said.
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Comments (33)
Awesome!!@ Loving it!!!❤️❤️💕
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Baaahahahaha! Yes. Excellent work. Still funny! 😂😂😂😂
This is quite the read. I think this would be a good one to share in a marriage counseling session just to seek out other humorous ideas about couples and marriage.
I think I prefer to enjoy sex and chocolate separately, even now and I'm nowhere near sixty yet :D Thank you, this was so down to earth, like a breath of fresh air xx
Wow
This made me lol! Oh the things we do for chocolate (and desire)!😉 Well done!
Ohh this was refreshing and honest and clever I enjoyed it and I love chocolate lol
This was really funny and I enjoyed this 😂😂Congrats on Top story!!💕🥰🙌
😅 “Lesson learned” she said. Fun read! And congrats!
Cute story please stop by and read mine
Lol! Oh my goodness, this was so funny! 😂❤️ Congratulations on Top Story!
Very clever and funny! I really enjoyed this!
Ohhh no 😩🫣🤣. Hilarious… what a sticky mess!
Dear DW ~ My Motto: If it ain't Chocolate WHY Bother -However it happens to be 'Dipped' ~ - With Pleasure - Jay Jay Kantor, Chatsworth, California 'Senior' Vocal Author - Vocal Author Community -
LOL!!! All the stuff that healthcare workers see... This was such a great read, clever and oh so much fun. Wonderful work, my friend!! Congratulations on Top Story :)
Great story, I'd pay good money to watch the video to accompany the recording. 🤣 Congrats on the Top Story!
Hahah oh dear, what a disaster 😅🤣. Great poem, I wasn’t expecting it to go that way at all - thanks for sharing
This was hilarious! I could hear the snickers and hushed comments of the EMS personnel. Congratulations on Top Story!
Great voice!
This was really funny and raised some questions I don’t think I really want answered 😂
This is so funny and so adult entertainment. Loved it, congrats.
Fantastic and so funny to read!! ❣️ Very well deserved TS!! x
Hilarious absolutely too funny!!! Congratulations on Top Story, she said!!!❤️❤️💕
Awesome ❤️ I Love it❗ Congratulations on your Top Story🎉🎉