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There's Magic Tonight

A Romantic/Scientific Sensational Challenge Entry

By Paul StewartPublished 3 years ago β€’ Updated 3 years ago β€’ 1 min read
There's Magic Tonight
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There's magic tonight

as the light shines through your stunning blonde hair dancing for my optic nerve

There's magic tonight

as your voice carries your loving words and pretty tones, awakening my auditory nerve

There's magic tonight

as that familiar scent flows with the breeze and triggers my olfactory nerve

There's magic tonight

as the touch of your soft and delicate skin calms and excites my trigeminal nerve

There's magic tonight

as that sweet taste of your kiss decadently engages my glossopharyngeal nerve

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  • Heather Hubler3 years ago

    I'm re-titling this "You're on my nerves". Of course you had me at geeky, medical terms. I loved how they didn't interrupt the romantic side of this though. Of course, that could just be me, lol. Loved it!

  • Simply magical.

  • Test3 years ago

    This was great Paul, I loved the repetitive line through out! You definitely played on the senses of the reader and created a beautiful story in this poem!

  • WOW that is awesome. But I have to say, because I am a bit of a smart ass....you are getting on my nerves, LOL

  • L.C. SchΓ€fer3 years ago

    This is some good shit 😁

  • Dana Crandell3 years ago

    Look at you getting all romantical and stuff! 🀣 Seriously, this is awesome. Well done, Paul!

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