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there goes the sun

((blue haiku))

By MorganaPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
Runner-Up Sky-ku Challenge
there goes the sun
Photo by Tom Barrett on Unsplash

god glitters golden

then greets the gloomy gloaming

drowns in midnight blue

nature poetry

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Morgana

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  • Susan Payton11 months ago

    Drowns in the midnight blue. Fantastic Haiku.

  • Gregory Paytonabout a year ago

    Congratulations on runner up.

  • Marie381Uk about a year ago

    Well done 🌼🌼🌼🌼🌼🌼

  • Laura Pruettabout a year ago

    Congrats!

  • C. H. Richardabout a year ago

    Congratulations ❤️ Great job!

  • John Coxabout a year ago

    Congrats on placing in the challenge, Morgana! Great work!

  • Ryan Burkeyabout a year ago

    Love the use of descriptive color. Great work!

  • Caroline Janeabout a year ago

    Fabulous word choices. Gorgeous phrasing too. Congratulations Morgana. 🥰

  • R. B. Boothabout a year ago

    Superb, loved your take on this and creative bent you took. Really wonderful to read.

  • Natalie Wilkinsonabout a year ago

    Congratulations Morgana!

  • Natalie Wilkinsonabout a year ago

    Congratulations Morgana! I’m glad to see some from the Blue Haiku Challenge made it.

  • Lightning Bolt ⚡about a year ago

    Love alliteration! Congratulations on the accolade! ⚡❤️⚡

  • Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Beautiful nature Haiku!!! Congratulations on the runner up win!!!❤️❤️💕

  • Raymond G. Taylorabout a year ago

    Drowning in midnight blue. Oh to be so! Loved it. Really well done and congratulations on your win.

  • Grz Colmabout a year ago

    Congrats on your placement! 😊

  • Dana Crandellabout a year ago

    Congratulations, Morgana!

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