THEN I CRIED
Raw Pain
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I’d set you free,
And then I cried.
I thought my heart
And soul had died.
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Through all my anguish
And all my pain
I knew I’d never
Love again.
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So, I made a decision
On that fateful day,
Though I loved you dearly,
I sent you away.
About the Creator
Margaret Brennan
I am a 78-year old grandmother who loves to write, fish, and grab my camera to capture the beautiful scenery I see around me.
My husband and I found our paradise in Punta Gorda Florida where the weather always keeps us guessing.
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Comments (5)
Raw emotions, sad and so beautifully written. Well done.
Sad, yet beautifully written. 🤗
It's so sad when we have to let go of what we love. Your poem was so emotional!
A beautiful and moving poem. It is well-written and emotionally resonant. I especially appreciate the poem's honesty and its realistic portrayal of the grieving process.❤️❤️
Melancholy!!! Yet, brilliantly written!!!💕❤️❤️