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Then Came The Summer Rain

What a big wet mess

By Marie381Uk Published 7 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

Then Came The Summer Rain

The sky hung low in quiet dread

cold streets where broken footsteps bled

walls wore stains of days gone wrong

and nights dragged out too long, too long

Shadows thick with things unsaid

hearts half-living, hearts half-dead

windows shut against the pain

then came the rain

It fell like sorrow from the skies

no comfort, no disguise

just endless tears in falling streams

that washed away our dreams

Well, it ruined our bloody holiday 😝😜

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Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Tiffany Gordon7 months ago

    Fantastic writing; very witty!

  • Mark Graham7 months ago

    That's the way the cookie crumbles when one has plans somehow and bad luck weather. Good job I could hear the angst.

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