.
if this crazy planet we ride
has taught me one thing
it’s this
we are all doing our best
given our circumstances
playing the hands
that we were dealt
be it by hugs
or by the belt
this life
that
we were thrust into
...live it
grab every single fucking microsecond
it's all we’ll ever get
and it’s our choice
we either go
forwards
or
backwards
everything else
is a vacuum
abhorred by nature
it’s a microchoice
heartbeat
heartbeat
heartbeat
heartbeat
feel the pulse
in your throat
it is at this point
we have ALL the power
of the infinite universe
behind us
to alter our balance
our direction
our mood and our mind
acceptance
and
forgiveness
will never leave us blind
will never lead to a bind
they will show that what we find
an affirmation of the kind
that we want
that we need
good things
will always come
to those
who wait
About the Creator
Bren
"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa
"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend
Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler
I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!
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I will add that "good things/will always come/to those/who wait" and work for nothing will ever come to those who do nothing. I like the "heartbeat" bit, this promise of the only life we have. It's sad, but also purifying. All-in-one!