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The Wrong Daughter

A poem

By Sara WilsonPublished 6 months ago 1 min read

Look at what she does

Its magic, Bravo!

She does everything right

Oh, just look at her go!

Oh, you wrote a book?

well, that's cool, I guess.

It's not really my thing

but it's a book, nonetheless.

Aww look at my girl

She wrecked someone's marriage

She stole someone's kids

Let's buy a new baby carriage!

Oh, you married that guy?

Well, I heard he's a jerk.

You're a stay-at-home mom?

Go find some real work.

Wow, my girl is a teacher!

I am ever so proud!

She's working so hard!

I'm cheering so loud!

You homeschool your kids?

Nah, that's straight up trash.

Send em to real school

Get a job, make some cash!

Listen to my babies speech!

She's been through so much!

She can change the whole world

with her magical touch

Your makeup is stupid

Your drawings are lame

Your life is in shambles

You bring me nothing but shame

I'll worship one daughter

Abandon the other

The perfect child is mine

The spares just like her mother

Family

About the Creator

Sara Wilson

I love Ugly Things.

I try and be active AND interactive.

I write... whatever I feel.

Sometimes it's happy.. sometimes it isn't. But it's real. And it's me.

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  • Katelynne La Stelly2 months ago

    He lost the treasure

  • Marvelous Michael5 months ago

    Bruhh! I know how this feels, and you’ve captured it so beautifully in writing!🥺 There’s a song Matilda by Harry Styles… also the movie Matilda. It’s like a warm hug for those who feel unseen/ misunderstood by family. It’s truly so heart-wrenching going through this, but it slowly helps you build a self-esteem that’s not rooted on the validation of humans. And how freeing is thattt?! I’m so proud of you! I think your are absolutely writings are fabulous!💗

  • Lamar Wiggins6 months ago

    Whoa!!! The back and forth felt so real. I could see smiles for the one daughter and frowns for the other. The ending brings it full circle for me. Hope all is well with you, my friend!

  • Unfortunately, this is the sad reality. It's just so heartbreaking. Sending you lots of love and hugs ❤️

  • Tiffany Gordon6 months ago

    So 💔'ing Sending you a big hug of comfort Sara! I've missed you my friend! 🌸

  • Margaret Brennan6 months ago

    my mom always said that perfection is a state of mind. If you go there often enough, you can easily forget reality. She was so right. her "other" daughter thought she was perfect and now, she's alone. Her "perfection" chased everyone away. So sad and yet, so perfect.

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