The Woman in the Rain
A Gold Vial, A Repetitive Curse

It really looks like it could rain
She’s running through the trees
Her dress is flowing in the wind
And catching at her knees
The clouds, so dark and heavy
The air, so fast and thick
The young girl just kept running
Like she had some fight to pick
At one point, she was sprinting
And tripped over a rock
I thought she’d maybe stop at this
But she got back up and walked
Eventually, it started to rain
But something wasn’t right
The woman just continued to run
With what seemed like all her might
The rain it hit her face with anger
Begging her to stop
The woman didn’t care at all
As if she didn’t feel a drop
The thunder didn’t scare her,
Though it was yelling in her ear
She simply kept on sprinting
Like a small and frantic deer
Then, the lighting fired down
In angry, white-hot streaks
This is when I noticed
The tears rolling down her cheeks
The woman kept on running,
Fearful yet unscathed
The woman barely broke her stride
Yet she didn’t seem unfazed
The more she ran, the quicker she got
With thunderclaps and rain
Then all of a sudden, she started to scream
As if she were in pain
I wanted to send her some help
Or ask her where she’s going
But as I went to do just that
The woman started glowing
Her hair was the first to start to shine
It went a sort of gold
And then I saw her fingers turn
And she looked sort of cold
It was such a very shocking sight
I didn’t know what to think
The gold, just then, encompassed her
And then I saw the drink
It sat there right beside the girl
Empty and afraid
The sight alone was super strange
So I stayed in the shade
The rain stopped pouring silently
And the woman seemed to calm
She sat down on a nearby log
And began repeating psalms
I turned around to walk away
I’m scared out of my mind
But as I turned to leave, I swear
The woman caught my eye
She stood up tall and waved at me
In an evil sort of way
I knew just then, I had to run
And as I ran, I prayed
I ran so fast that my shirt was flying
Darting through the wind
I heard her distant steps get closer
And saw her gold arm extend
“Drink this, please,” the woman called
Sticking out a vial
As I went to grab the glass
I swear I saw her smile
I grabbed the drink and tossed it out
Into the thick, gross mire
The woman looked as mad as ever
As if what I’d done was dire
I ran so fast I almost screamed
But then I saw a boy
He peered behind a giant tree
Sat watching like a ploy
The gravel behind me starts to shift
I know she’s getting closer
Before I even start to think
She grabs me by my shoulder
I turn to see the woman’s face
For what must be the first time
Her eyes were sunken, deep, and gray
Her teeth, covered in grime
Her hair looked stringy, lined with grease
And somehow, she seemed scared
She asked me, then, about a drink
She wanted me to share
It was in a pretty, shimmery bottle
Wax sealed and a bow
I shouldn’t have trusted her, the thought crossed my mind
But I figured I should know
I grabbed the bottle, shaking a bit
And held it to my lips
And as it slipped down my throat
Something in me flipped
It all seemed to happen just like it started
Fast and so unknown
Then her skin began to change
And reach its normal tone
Suddenly, she seemed alight
Yet now I was in pain
Just as the woman turned to leave
Well, it began to rain
She was gone, now, once again
And I was standing still
And then I saw this younger boy
Coming up the hill
- B.G
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I'm Brittany, and I'm so glad you're here. I'm 24 years old, and I hold a bachelor's degree in Creative Writing and English. Thank you for reading, and feel free to subscribe so you don't miss any stories! (it's freee)!



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