The Window She Never Closed
Some wait with hands on glass, long after the door has been locked from the outside.

She sat by the window
where silence had a name.
Not hers.
Not his.
But a third one —
formed by the space he left.
The tea on her table
cooled like promises,
forgotten mid-sentence.
Her fingers traced the rim of the cup
like they once traced
his laugh lines.
Each evening,
the light would slant just enough
to cast shadows where he once stood —
filling the room with ghosts
that didn’t knock.
Neighbors spoke in whispers:
“She waits for a man
who isn’t coming back.”
But they never knew
that some people leave
without doors ever closing.
She watered the plant
on the sill he once leaned on.
It grew sideways,
toward the emptiness.
Just like her love.
She never burned his letters.
Instead, she folded them
into tiny boats
and sent them adrift
on the puddles after rain.
"Maybe paper floats better
when soaked in hope,"
she whispered once,
to no one.
On her birthday,
she baked his favorite cake —
then left two slices
at the table.
She ate one.
And left the other
for memory.
Some say grief ends.
But she knew better.
It doesn’t end —
it just softens
until you mistake it for furniture.
And that window?
It still opens
just enough
for her to breathe him in
when the wind is right.
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About the Creator
Mahmood Afridi
I write about the quiet moments we often overlook — healing, self-growth, and the beauty hidden in everyday life. If you've ever felt lost in the noise, my words are a pause. Let's find meaning in the stillness, together.
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You’ve got such a unique style—this was a great read! I’d be honored if you gave one of my stories a look too 🙏