The Weeping Star
Sparkles And Tears…
By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 2 years ago • 1 min read
Photo by Hikarinoshita Hikari on Unsplash
I Watched The Sparkles
Twinkle In The Sky,
I Heard The Sounds Of A Loud Cry…
And Then I Saw The Tears In His Eyes,
“He Said, “One Final Twinkle Before The Burnout,
Make One Wish And Save My Life”.
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Comments (7)
The fleeting beauty of sparkles in the sky is juxtaposed with a poignant plea for salvation. The imagery of tears in the eyes and the urgency of making one final wish evokes a sense of vulnerability and desperation. The poem captures a moment of profound significance, where hope hangs on a delicate balance. It leaves us with a lingering sense of empathy and the weight of the human experience. Loved it. And hope to read more of your work, thank you very much again for sharing this soul-to-soul journey that touched our hearts. Subscribed.
make the wish for hope
Nice job! You left me with shivers.
A lovely and well-wrought short poem. Burning out is something with which I am all too familiar, especially facing this heat in the Midwestern U.S. A double entendre?
Brilliant work!
Super inspirational!!! Loved it!!!💕❤️❤️
Just simply beautiful. Good work.