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The war eternal

A haiku

By Shane DobbiePublished 3 years ago 1 min read

The elements rage,

Fire, ice, air, water, trapped

In eternal war

nature poetry

About the Creator

Shane Dobbie

If writing is a performance art then I’m tap dancing in wellies.

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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    Writing reflected the title & theme

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  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Splendid!!!

  • Cathy holmes3 years ago

    Nicely done.

  • Heather Hubler3 years ago

    It really is true when you think about it. Nicely done :)

  • Good take on the challenge

  • Novel Allen3 years ago

    So true.

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