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The Victorian Dinosaur Shopping Centre

Hotel & Spa

By Sandra TenaPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 2 min read
Second Place in Poemosaurus Rex Challenge
Engraving: the "Crystal Palace" at the Great Exhibition, by George Baxter. Sourced from Wikipedia

All the world was utterly surprised when Sir Richard Owen discovered us,

A paleontologist discovering but living beings?

Crystal Palace was abuzz with visitors travelling from far and wide,

Just to look at us all: big and startling and stranger than anything else they had ever seen.

I think they thought they were looking for something bygone,

Prehistoric, they might have called it in another time or space,

And when they saw us, living and breathing and interacting with the world,

All the humans had to re-consider their way of seeing life!

Within weeks they accommodated us into their social strands,

Although we couldn't remain at Crystal Palace then

(they would not trust our size and shapes at close distance of the gleaming quarters of the Great Exhibition at Sydenham)

So, very soon we all had new homes in the park,

And plenty of spaces for us to relax.

We became celebrities, and had our likenesses sculpted by Benjamin Waterhouse Hawkins,

Commissioned by Sir Richard Owen by-the-by.

(I say "our likeness", but the sculptor took certain liberties! I suppose that's a thing with artists, though.)

All the travelers who came required places to unwind and shop,

And pretty soon it was created: the Victorian Dinosaur Shopping Mall.

Humans had everything they needed while they vacationed in our company,

(Well, I say company, but they came to stare in awe!)

And happily they had the decency to include us in the mix:

Our expenses paid for by the income from the tourists,

We explored art galleries and ate at the poshest restaurants,

We sang at the local cabaret,

Swam with the bathers in the lakes

(Though often we were left to bathe alone, as the lakes felt cramped and often swarmed)

We picnicked at the palace terraces,

The closest we could ever get to the grandiose gleaming hall,

And went to the cinema before we remembered that it hadn't been invented yet.

We met for coffee in the afternoons,

And played cricket with the gentry,

And for any lifestyle needs, we could always shop at T-Rex Maxx.

But pretty soon the tourists' needs had grown, and so the mall, too, grew along.

Our little place in Blighty had now become:

The Victorian Dinosaur Shopping Centre, Hotel & Spa.

That story might have to wait for another time:

I have a booking for my Stegosaurus Full Body Massage.

~*~

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About the Creator

Sandra Tena

Actress, Model, Writer

Co-producer at His & Hers Theatre Company

Esoteric Practitioner

Idealist

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  • Angie the Archivist 📚🪶9 months ago

    This is so a cute, imaginative take on the challenge… so playful.😃

  • Pauline Fountainabout a year ago

    Congratulations on your win. This is delightful. I’d like to visit ‘The Victorian Dinosaur Shopping Centre!’ Pauline 🌸

  • Novel Allen2 years ago

    Grand concept of everyone getting along. Love the cover pic and the historic references. Congrtas.

  • Golam Kibria2 years ago

    Congrats for your win

  • Very creative 👌👏🥰congrats on your success and win

  • Wooohooooo Congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Denelsia Walker2 years ago

    Very creative! I absolutely adored this. Definitely a place I would love to visit. This needs to be an entire book. Outstanding! ✨✨✨✨✨

  • JBaz2 years ago

    Great imagery throughout the entire piece. well done and Congratulations

  • Shirley Belk2 years ago

    So creative! Congratulations

  • Andrea Corwin 2 years ago

    Full body massage, LOL. Great job and congrats on the win!!

  • Lamar Wiggins2 years ago

    Congratulations Sandra. So imaginative. Great work!!! 🤩

  • Christy Munson2 years ago

    So fun! Congratulations!!! 🥳

  • Congratulations

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    Congrats!

  • So excited to see you up the in second place Sandra. And the Crystal Palace dinosaurs are just up the hill from me too! Really well done!!! ❤️❤️❤️

  • Yay WINNER

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Loved it!!!❤️❤️💕

  • I love how you created a modern world using these prehistoric base as your Central theme. Great work and very creative!

  • Hehehehehehehe this was so fun! I loved it!

  • That's super cute 🩷

  • Cute and pretty funny too.

  • angela hepworth2 years ago

    Haha so cute!

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