The Upstairs Place
With the noisy neighbours.

The upstairs neighbours are noisy.
They drag furniture around at 2 AM.
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Heavy scraping —
like a chair too big for the space,
legs grinding against warped floorboards.
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I tell myself they’re just night owls,
odd schedules,
maybe insomniacs redecorating at strange hours.
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But the sounds don’t make sense.
Nothing ever settles.
It’s like they move the same piece
back and forth,
never deciding where it belongs.
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And then there’s the knocking.
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At first, I thought it was hammering —
but no.
Softer,
closer.
Like fingertips.
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It’s not rhythmic,
not random either.
I even checked if it was Morse code.
But it isn’t.
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Just tapping —
like someone waiting
for something to happen.
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This building forgets people.
The walls swallow stories,
the ones no one bothers to remember.
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It forgot Mr. Urbanek last winter.
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He lived upstairs —
where the noises come from now, I know.
Had been there longer than anyone.
Quiet, mostly.
Polite.
The kind of man who became part of the wallpaper.
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We spoke once —
on the stairs.
He handed me a sandwich,
wrapped in a napkin.
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“You look… like my wife,” he said,
his voice thick with an old accent,
words stumbling over themselves.
“When she was young.”
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I didn’t know what to say.
I took the sandwich.
Didn’t eat it,
but I remember the smell —
dry rye and something sour.
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Like when they found him —
it had been weeks.
Not a pretty sight when they opened the door.
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On his shelf were eight urns.
His whole family,
lined up in neat rows,
generations gone before him.
Parents, a sister,
his wife,
even a child.
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That was all he had left.
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We chipped in,
paid for his cremation too.
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But there was nowhere to send him —
no more Czechoslovakia.
No home to return him to.
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So we took the urns,
his ashes too,
and poured them into the backyard.
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Quiet.
Almost respectful.
But not really.
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And the upstairs neighbours?
Sometimes, I hear them muttering.
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A language I don’t understand —
but recognize.
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The same sounds Mr. Urbanek made
when he talked to himself in the stairwell.
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Are they his friends?
People from the old country?
It’s hard to tell —
the voices are muffled,
like coming through too many walls.
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I work late.
My clients start around 7 PM.
No one wants to fuck before that —
not with someone like me.
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Sometimes they notice the noises.
Ask what it is.
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I tell them —
neighbours,
old pipes,
this building’s just like that.
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But the taps —
soft, persistent —
they keep coming.
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Sometimes I feel them in my wrists,
when I’m working.
Like tiny pulses,
beating under the skin.
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I tell myself it’s nothing.
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But sometimes,
in the middle of a job,
I catch myself listening too hard —
waiting for the taps to stop.
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And I wonder —
who’s moving the furniture?
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But then —
I don’t want to know.
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This building forgets people.
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And sometimes,
it forgets
to let them go.
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About the Creator
Iris Obscura
Do I come across as crass?
Do you find me base?
Am I an intellectual?
Or an effed-up idiot savant spewing nonsense, like... *beep*
Is this even funny?
I suppose not. But, then again, why not?
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Comments (2)
Super surreal and superbly written!!!
At first, I felt called out hah, as we are upstairs neighbours! we dont always move furniture tho! then as I read I got swept up in the mystery, the suspense, the dark...and had many questions by the end! Great stuff!