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The Unloved Twins

A mother who hated her babies

By Marie381Uk Published 6 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

The Unloved Twins

In a quiet room the twins were born

a mother’s hands that fed and cared

but cold between her silent eyes

no warmth to hold them when they cried

She kept them safe but never close

her heart a room shut tight and bare

two fragile lives beneath her watch

but love was something not to share

They learned to live without her touch

to grow in shadows of her gaze

her presence like a distant ghost

that never softened or would stay

In a quiet room the twins remain

with care but never feeling loved

two souls that waited, still and quiet

for something more they never found

just an angry mother never proud.

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Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Mark Graham6 months ago

    How sad for who could not love two little babies and not hug them a lot.

  • Huzaifa Dzine6 months ago

    amazing

  • Irfan Ali6 months ago

    💔 This poem quietly shatters the heart. The emotional absence of a mother — even when physically present — leaves wounds that words can barely heal. The image of the twins growing up in silence, cared for but untouched by love, is haunting. So many live with this invisible grief — the kind that never had a name, just a lifelong ache. 🕯️ Powerful and painfully beautiful writing.

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